The Love in Between

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Comments

Unknown said…
makes me curious about the war and I googled it.. LOL~
anyway.. I simply thought that this poem isn't about the real war right? :P
10:57 AM
mang said…
no of course not.
i don't even think that the war exists. =p

it's about love. tragedy.
12:00 PM
Unknown said…
LOL~ but I google it and found about Chechnya war I and II.. it's all about the russian matters.. hahahah..
but then I guess the right thing ne? :P
12:04 PM
mang said…
haha... maybe i used to heard about that war, and becoming my background.

well, you haven't stated the idea of the story.
6:07 PM
Unknown said…
upsss.. iya ya blm gw tulis.. hahaha.. I guess it's about love relationship.. but somewhat disturbed in the middle,maybe about commitment made or sumthin principal.. someone fights but somehow it still doesn't work.. that's what I'm thinking about the poem.. CMIIW
9:30 PM
mang said…
hmmm.... not really about that. =p
10:14 PM
Unknown said…
love triangle?
9:01 PM
mang said…
@michelle: yes, correct.
10:09 PM
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